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Who’s driving this crazy thing?

What is this whole process of storytelling? Sometimes we get so caught up in character arcs, plot points storyboarding, outlines vs pantsing, and God knows what else, that we forget what makes up a story and how to tell one. Sure all of the volumes on writing craft will take you down into the weeds of writing and break down every detail of the mechanics involved. However, sometimes it’s all those details that get in the way of telling a good story. I know a few writers who are so worried about the details that they become “Blocked”. We will discuss writers block in another post so I’m not going down that dark hole today.

Let me start by telling you a story:

A group of writers were sitting on a patio, drinking their tea and eating cucumber sandwiches. Being the novice among the group, I asked the question, “What do you need to tell a good story?” They all took another bite of their sandwiches and then sipped their tea. Thoughtfully, One of the more successful of the group announced that, “All you need, to tell a story, is POV and ask the question, ‘What happens next?'” His comment was followed by much head nodding and quiet mumblings of, “Yea, verily, yea.” by the rest of the successful writers present. I took this pearl of wisdom and pondered it for some time. It now seems to me to be sage advice.

Point of View (POV). Who is telling the story? This should be the most interesting person in the story. In my example above, the most interesting person is Me! 🙂 Notice I said most interesting and not most successful. The POV does not need to be from the main character. The two most used POVs are first person and third person. Third person can be further broken down to: close (intimate) view, or omniscient. Whole books have been written on these POVs so I will not go too deep here. The key thing to remember is that the POV dictates how much information can be given the reader and in what form that information will be delivered, narrative, dialogue, actions, etc.

Once you know who is telling the story, the thing that drives the story is the question, “What happens next?” Those of you who routinely write flash fiction should be very experienced with this question. All flash fiction and most writing exercises start with a prompt. For example: “I looked out the window of the airplane and …”. The writer then asks the question what happens next and writes a few sentences. Then, what happens next? Writer, writes a few more sentences and so on until the story ends or you reach so many pages that you have to make it a series. This is how stories are made.

A subset of the question what happens next is the “What if?” The quickest way I have found to get past a block is to ask the question “What if?” and write down the answer, even if it is off the wall and I know it will not make it into the final story. Then again it might! As writers we need to take risks, try new things, experiment. Desperation breeds genius. It is important not to judge the answer until you have given it a good chance to develop.

So, pick the right POV for the story, ask, “What happens next?”, then go tell your story.

What do you think?

 
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Posted by on July 16, 2013 in Thoughts on Writing

 

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Storytelling Through the Written Word

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We all think we have a story to tell. If not, why would we want to become writers? As writers, telling stories is what we do, isn’t it? Let’s find out.

The website, Storytellingday.net, defines storytelling as: “An art form of conveying a series of events in words, images, and sounds, which are often supported by creative thinking or an exaggeration.” The National Storytelling Network (Untied States and Canada) website defines it as: “The interactive art of using words and actions to reveal the elements and images of a story while encouraging the listener’s imagination.” Keeping in mind that these organizations refer to the oral tradition of storytelling and we are discussing written storytelling, I’m going to take a liberty and use readers where they use listeners.

Storytelling is, in fact, an oral tradition that goes back as far time itself. Some have postulated that the first stories were told to explain a failure. Hmm… “..supported by creative thinking or an exaggeration.” maybe that’s were fishing tall tales got their start. Sounds like fiction to me. We will come back to this later.

I remember as a boy sitting around the campfire listening to my elders tell stories about hunting, fishing, working on the railroad, or humorous war stories. I sat enthralled for hours. To this day I love to hear a good story told well. One of my favorite movies, “Out of Africa”, has a character that is a great storyteller. She is given the names of a couple of characters by her audience and she then creates a story off the top of her head that may go on for hours.

For the purpose of this post, I will define storytelling as: “Using written words that encourage the reader to use their active imagination, to create a sensory-laden story where the reader is fully engaged.” Now let’s see if can explain myself over the next few paragraphs.

The easy part is the first part. As writers, we use written words. On occasion, we can use cover art or illustrations to help convey story. However, words are our world. There are a lot of words at our disposal. Some are better than others. This is where the writer’s craft comes into play. The writer needs to select the best combination of words to help the reader create a real world. Choosing the right words is the art of writing. There are libraries full of how-to books on writing. Nearly all of them have good advice. But, ultimately, it is up to the writer to choose what works best for the story in question.

We have little control over the quality of the reader’s imagination. Each person is different. Some people can take a few words from a writer and create a whole fantastic world. Those reader need very little setting detail get into the story. Others can’t imagine anything that is not actually resting in their hands. All of the flowery descriptive prose in the world is needed to help them “see” what the writer sees. A writer must know their audience so as to chose the best words to fire what imagination the reader has.

If we want to reader to hear sounds, smell odors, feel textures, taste flavors, we must use words to help the reader build those things. Storytellers using the written word must choose their words carefully to help the reader create the real story in their head. Writers, just like in the oral tradition, must incorporate each of the reader’s five senses. The writer must see, hear, feel, taste, and smell the world they are trying to put to paper. The more vividly we write, the easier it is for our audience to be completely absorbed into the story. One of the keys to good writing, in my humble opinion, is to add the sensory details to the story without spending a page and a half explaining what a sunrise looks like. A few words scattered here and there within the action of the scene seems smoother and more interesting to read than an info dump.

Isn’t what what we’re after, as storytellers, is for the reader to be completely absorbed in the story? Have you ever read a book and become so engrossed in it that you find yourself laughing out loud? Or, you feel the character’s frustration and cry out in anguish? Or, feel the pain of the character’s loss and begin to cry? When that happens, the writing storyteller has accomplished the task at hand.

That brings us to the question of “…use of creative thinking or exaggeration.” On the surface this would push the storyteller toward the realm of fiction. However, non-fiction writers, do not despair! Even textbooks can be written in such a way as to draw the reader into the subject matter and still be truthful. The use of real-life experiences, anecdotes, and examples can help to make even the driest material palatable  Exaggerations can also be used to help prove a point. I have not seen a lot of this technique used in pure non-fiction. However, I’m sure it has.

Good writers are indeed storytellers, regardless of their genre of choice. Becoming a good writer is what we all strive for. The good news is, we ALL have a story to tell.

 
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Posted by on January 8, 2013 in Thoughts on Writing

 

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