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Goldmine for Characters

I love airports. The hustle and bustle of people from so many different places. Where do they all come from? Where are they all going? Why do they dress the way they do? What language are they speaking? I can think of few places better to study people. A large shopping mall would be a second option.

Take your notebook and sit down with a cold drink where you can see people as they pass by. Pick one and describe them, in detail. Be sure to include small details, not just their height and weight. Do they have any scars or visible tattoos? Might they have some hidden? Go ahead take a guess. I do not recommend you go up and ask them, unless of course, you are an extreme extrovert and don’t mind a hard slap in the face.

Now, think about what they are doing in the airport. Where are they going and why. C’mon, you’re creative. It’s easy. What sort of intrigue are they involved in? Did they just have a fight with their boss? Spouse? Stranger? What about? What conflict drives them? OMG isn’t this fun?

With a little luck you can hear them talk to someone else. How does their voice sound? Is it high or low? Does it have texture? Is there a dialect you can pick up on. What are they talking about? Business, Family matters? Corporate politics? Write it down. Don’t sit there staring at them. You don’t want to be arrested for stalking, do you?

Sometimes you have to write fast. They move in and out of your life so fast. That’s okay, there are lots more. If you can’t fill up a notebook during a two-hour layover in O’Hare or La Guardia, you are not trying very hard. Now the hard part is over.

Here is the fun. During the two and a half hour flight to anywhere, look through your notes. Try to regain the image of each character. Think about the story you are writing. Where can this character fit in? Some times it’s hard. But remember, there are lots of characters in your story. They may be minor but why not let them have the back story you created. Most of the time I come up with several good to great characters that can easily be inserted into my story.

I will leave you with one piece of advice. The next time you are traveling through an airport and you happen to see a man scribbling away in a notebook who occasionally glances your way. Have no fear. It is only me, adding to my list of characters.

Have a nice day!

 
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Posted by on February 27, 2012 in Other Strangeness

 

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Islands vs. Outlines

I make lists. Lists for groceries, lists for travel, lists of honey-dos, lists of camping gear, lists of plants, lists of writing topics, lists of characters, lists of places (both real and imagined), and lists of lists. The CEO of my domicile has informed me repeatedly that I have too many notepads, file drawers, and binders filled with lists. Add to that several years as a corporate trainer and it should be easy to see why using an outline to develop a novel would be a logical choice for me. Honestly, that was how it started. I sat down and created an outline of chapters for my first novel. When I finished, I was so proud of it. I thought, “Wow this is going to be so easy.”

Starting at page one I proceeded methodically thinking that the best approach. A few months later, reality set in. Four chapters in and I had no idea where I was going. Somehow I had gotten off track and was at a dead end. The characters had not done what I originally thought they would. (Imagine that!) I saw no way to get them back to the outline. I lost interest and ended up setting the whole project aside. The process repeated itself several times. Each time, I could see scenes I wanted to include in the story but never wrote them because the characters left the outline behind.

As it happened, I picked up a book on screenwriting by  Blake Snyder entitled, “Save The Cat!”. In it, he talked about something called “story boards”. A few weeks later I took a class from Mary Carroll Moore called “Your Book Starts Here.” Two days of the class were devoted to developing a story structure using story boards and something she called “islands”. The lightbulb came on!

Okay, some of you are rolling your eyes. But for me, this was new toy I had never seen before. The great part is, I can create a list! I can create my list of (islands) that are scattered throughout my head. I then scribble them on post-it notes and place them on my story board.  Once I determine what my most critical scenes are, the rest of the islands fill in the blank spaces of the story board. With the initial story board in place, I go back and write the scenes in any order I chose. If I find that a scene needs to go someplace else in the story, I move it. The transitions between scenes can be a little tricky but that can be cleaned up later.

The freedom of not having to stick to the outline has let me focus on getting words on paper (hard drive). I no longer worry about how it will all fit together in the end. Yes, I have over simplified the process. Yes, I will end up writing scenes that may never be used in the final story. BUT, I am writing more! I also feel that my writing has improved.

So, I would like to hear from you. Do you write from an outline or from scattered islands? Perhaps you do both as each has a place in our writers toolkit.

 
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Posted by on February 20, 2012 in Other Strangeness

 

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The Keep – Flash #2

Here is another Flash. The prompt for this flash was a first line provided by another member of my writer’s group. The prompt was: “The cat tensed and then leapt…”

The hunting cat tensed and then leapt for Yursi’s throat. Yursi dodged but the agility of the cat allowed one paw to swat Yursi on the back as it flew past. The additional momentum threw Yursi to the ground. Before she could come to her knees, the cat was on her.

One paw on her chest and one on her right arm effective pinned Yursi underneath the one hundred and fifty pound animal. The cat bared its fangs and hissed as only a cat can. Its fetid breath made Yursi gag which spoiled the spell that was on her lips. Yursi struggled to force the cat off but it was too strong. The cat’s gapping jaws reached toward Yursi’s face. Yursi closed her eyes as she could not imagine this would be her death.

The rough tongue started at Yursi’s chin and, in one long lick, covered her face with cat drool. Yursi opened her eyes. The cat still pinned her in place but it seemed to be smiling.

     “That’s enough.”

     The voice sounded frail yet the cat obediently moved off Yursi and walked a few strides away. It then sat down and began grooming itself.

     Yursi rolled to her feet and looked around for the source of the voice. Leaning against the trunk of a large oak tree was an old man about Yursi’s height. Thin grey hair covered his head and his angular jaw had grey stubble.  A curved pipe was clamped between his lips and a column of blue-grey smoke curled lazily up into the tree branches above.

 
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Posted by on February 15, 2012 in Short Stories

 

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The Keep – teaser

It’s about time I put something I wrote on this site. This is a flash using the main character from my short story. This may turn into the opening scene of another short story. We’ll have to see how it goes.

The two blades came together, one brilliant white, the other dull black. The instant they touched a ray of blue-white flame erupted from the union of steel and streaked toward the undead creature. The ray slammed into the creature’s chest with enough force to drive it back two steps. Ancient wrappings burst into flame. A slender woman watched the mummy thrash about as the conflagration engulfed it. The mummy collapsed and quickly turned to ash.

  Yursi Sonal brushed a stray black curl out of her dark eyes taking care not to cut off her nose with the white dagger. She looked back to the two other mummified bodies sprawled on the ground. A few moments before they had tried to kill her, now, neither one moved. Her breathing began to return to normal as she realized there were no more targets for her spells. As the excitement of battle wore off, her shoulders slumped.

  “You ignorant slug,” Yursi hissed to herself. “Why would you choose a cemetery as a good place to rest after dark?” I must be tired. I should be dead.

  Yursi continued to look about as she slid the two daggers into their sheaths. The waxing moon peaked above the horizon and was not quite covered by the incoming clouds, so Yursi could still tell what direction she needed to travel.

  “I guess I’ll sleep when I get to the keep.”

  Yursi shrugged into her rucksack, threw on her wool cloak, and put the cemetery behind her. She did not notice the pair of yellow eyes watching her from the treeline.

 
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Posted by on February 13, 2012 in Short Stories

 

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Positive Reinforcement

All too often we dwell on the negative. Our families know what buttons to push. Teachers tell us we need to apply ourselves. The media tells us that we are too dumb to know what is best for us. Our writers groups slice our sacred words to ribbons. And sometimes we actually believe them!

Then we take a break and regroup. We come back and open up our site and find the gem that shines as a beacon. A glimmer of hope that says, someone liked a post, someone made a comment that gives us a new idea, or someone like Shannon Howell gives you a Versatile Blogger Award.

No, it’s not like winning the lottery or receiving a six figure advance for a three book deal. However, it is positive reinforcement that indicates that what I do has touched someone else in some small way.

As I step to the podium to accept this award, I am reminded to complete three tasks:

1) Thank you, Shannon for thinking me worthy. Though my site is only a few weeks old, I promise to live up to the letter of this award.

2)  Seven things about myself not otherwise listed:

     a. Master Gardener through the University of Minnesota Extension Office.

     b. Ballroom dancing kept me busy until I decided to use the money spent on lessons to buy a house.

     c. I have built and flown radio-controlled airplanes.

     d. I am an omnivoure by genetic design.

     e. The first book I read cover to cover was, “Where Eagles Dare” by Alistair MacLean.

     f. I spent eight years working on advance life support ambulances.

     g. I am not a touch typist.

3) Fifteen Blogs that deserve this award (Are you kidding me?):

Robotic Rhetoric – Because he was the first to hit my site and he has an interesting sense of humor as he attempts to destroy the english language. 

M J Wright

 From Kathleen’s Desk

 Teschoenborn

 Writers Write Daily

 Compromise and Conceit

 Scribbling in the Storage Room

Michael Radcliffe

Dawn Ross

Making Baby Grand the Novel

Writings of Cassidy Cornblatt

Writing by the Numbers

Be a Novelist

Jake’s Blog

Nicola l Mcdonald

It may take me a while to notify everyone they have been nominated. However, I will get it done as soon as possible.

 
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Posted by on February 13, 2012 in Other Strangeness

 

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Heros and Villains

Which is harder to create and make real, your hero or your villain? Almost everyone I speak with says that villains are much more fun to write. “You can do anything and get away with it.”  “Let you mean side take over.” You can be despicable and no one gets hurt.” Well, I must be the odd ball. One of my greatest struggles is writing a believable villain. Now, I know that my antagonist must be at least as bad as my protagonist is good.  But, for some reason my bad guys keep coming off as cliché’s. The truth is that getting into the head of a psychopath is just plain scary. I’m not an evil person. I like to think that I’m a pretty nice guy. How in the world can I know what’s going on inside the head of a maniac? To borrow someone else’s quote, “Mean people suck.”

The good news is that over the past couple of months there has been a slight breakthrough. While doing some freewriting, I came upon the Keys that unlocked my antagonists. In one case it was a conversation with his mother-in-law regarding money and the fact that he can’t support her daughter the way he should. In the other case, it was growing up seeing the cleaning crews remove dead bodies of street people from the gutters of the slum each morning and finding out those bodies were taking to a man who was using them for interesting experiments. In each case there was a defining moment caused the individual to begin acting in an “evil” way. NOTE: For the record, I believe that evil is relative and is based on an individuals frame of reference. 

The Key is, what was the set of circumstances that set the antagonist on the path they walk? All of us, no matter how good and pacific we may think we are, if given the right set of circumstances, are capable of horrendous acts. This is the truth. If you do not believe me, watch the evening news or ask anyone who has been in a combat zone, worked in law enforcement, or emergency medicine. So, what is it that can make a nice, sane person turn “evil”? That is the question that I have been asking my characters. I ask them to remember their defining moment and then free write until I have enough material to explain their actions.

So, my friends, I have two questions for you: Do you prefer to write about your hero or your villain? How do you get inside your villain’s head?

 
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Posted by on February 6, 2012 in Other Strangeness

 

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