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Short Flashes of Inspiration

Now that the trauma of a home sale, home purchase, and big move is behind me, I can find time to write again. But, writing a novel can be a slog. Ask anyone who has tried it. Sometimes the mind just shuts down. The muse flies back to her mountaintop.

In an effort to trick the muse into returning, I decided to try my hand at some short and short-short fiction. Flash, if you will. I didn’t really realize how difficult short works can be until I applied strict word counts to each attempt. 7,000 to 12,000-word short stories are not too difficult. An engaging beginning, an interesting middle that moves the story along, and a snappy ending are all possible, and for me, quite doable at this length. However, once you enter the realm of 2,000 words or less, the difficulty factor ramps up a bit.

In flash fiction, the flowery descriptions of scenes, the finite details of combat, the lengthy monologues, and internalizations once used to enhance a storyline are too large to include and leave room for the shortened plotline. Every word must count for more than one thing. Every sentence must perform multiple functions.

My first attempts received mixed reviews. A friend from my writer’s group suggested I try poetry. She is quite accomplished, and I take her advice seriously. However, poetry and I do not seem to mix well. After a few pitiful attempts, I returned to editing with a microscope and a scalpel. It was a brutal process. I truly learned what the phrase, kill your darlings means. Any word that was not multi-tasking or absolutely necessary to create comprehensive sentences was quickly deleted.

One project was a 2,000-word short story to submit to a competition at the Lakefly Writer’s Conference in Oshkosh, Wisconsin, this spring. It took much longer than planned, and I missed the submission date. The original story was around 3750 words. I made the cuts to get it to 1,998 words!!! The good news is that I was able to submit a flash piece of around 700 words. We’ll see how that fares.

The bottom line is that this process taught me that word choice and thoughtful editing significantly impact the final piece. Additionally, I can successfully write shorter works. The good news is that the muse has returned, and work on the second novel has resumed.

 
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Posted by on April 4, 2025 in Other Strangeness

 

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Fantasy tidbits

Today I am guest posting for follow blogger byjhmae. I was surprised when she asked me. But I jumped at the chance. She always has an interesting take on writing and current issues. If you have not already dropped by her blog, do so. You will not be disappointed. And today, you would get the added pleasure of hearing more from me. 😉

As the title suggests I talk about how fantasy and bringing different spiritual cultures together can create conflict. There are also a few other tidbits on fantasy writing and magic systems. Enjoy.

Fantasy – the purest form of fiction

 
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Posted by on September 12, 2013 in Journey into Fantasy

 

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Storytelling Through the Written Word

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We all think we have a story to tell. If not, why would we want to become writers? As writers, telling stories is what we do, isn’t it? Let’s find out.

The website, Storytellingday.net, defines storytelling as: “An art form of conveying a series of events in words, images, and sounds, which are often supported by creative thinking or an exaggeration.” The National Storytelling Network (Untied States and Canada) website defines it as: “The interactive art of using words and actions to reveal the elements and images of a story while encouraging the listener’s imagination.” Keeping in mind that these organizations refer to the oral tradition of storytelling and we are discussing written storytelling, I’m going to take a liberty and use readers where they use listeners.

Storytelling is, in fact, an oral tradition that goes back as far time itself. Some have postulated that the first stories were told to explain a failure. Hmm… “..supported by creative thinking or an exaggeration.” maybe that’s were fishing tall tales got their start. Sounds like fiction to me. We will come back to this later.

I remember as a boy sitting around the campfire listening to my elders tell stories about hunting, fishing, working on the railroad, or humorous war stories. I sat enthralled for hours. To this day I love to hear a good story told well. One of my favorite movies, “Out of Africa”, has a character that is a great storyteller. She is given the names of a couple of characters by her audience and she then creates a story off the top of her head that may go on for hours.

For the purpose of this post, I will define storytelling as: “Using written words that encourage the reader to use their active imagination, to create a sensory-laden story where the reader is fully engaged.” Now let’s see if can explain myself over the next few paragraphs.

The easy part is the first part. As writers, we use written words. On occasion, we can use cover art or illustrations to help convey story. However, words are our world. There are a lot of words at our disposal. Some are better than others. This is where the writer’s craft comes into play. The writer needs to select the best combination of words to help the reader create a real world. Choosing the right words is the art of writing. There are libraries full of how-to books on writing. Nearly all of them have good advice. But, ultimately, it is up to the writer to choose what works best for the story in question.

We have little control over the quality of the reader’s imagination. Each person is different. Some people can take a few words from a writer and create a whole fantastic world. Those reader need very little setting detail get into the story. Others can’t imagine anything that is not actually resting in their hands. All of the flowery descriptive prose in the world is needed to help them “see” what the writer sees. A writer must know their audience so as to chose the best words to fire what imagination the reader has.

If we want to reader to hear sounds, smell odors, feel textures, taste flavors, we must use words to help the reader build those things. Storytellers using the written word must choose their words carefully to help the reader create the real story in their head. Writers, just like in the oral tradition, must incorporate each of the reader’s five senses. The writer must see, hear, feel, taste, and smell the world they are trying to put to paper. The more vividly we write, the easier it is for our audience to be completely absorbed into the story. One of the keys to good writing, in my humble opinion, is to add the sensory details to the story without spending a page and a half explaining what a sunrise looks like. A few words scattered here and there within the action of the scene seems smoother and more interesting to read than an info dump.

Isn’t what what we’re after, as storytellers, is for the reader to be completely absorbed in the story? Have you ever read a book and become so engrossed in it that you find yourself laughing out loud? Or, you feel the character’s frustration and cry out in anguish? Or, feel the pain of the character’s loss and begin to cry? When that happens, the writing storyteller has accomplished the task at hand.

That brings us to the question of “…use of creative thinking or exaggeration.” On the surface this would push the storyteller toward the realm of fiction. However, non-fiction writers, do not despair! Even textbooks can be written in such a way as to draw the reader into the subject matter and still be truthful. The use of real-life experiences, anecdotes, and examples can help to make even the driest material palatable  Exaggerations can also be used to help prove a point. I have not seen a lot of this technique used in pure non-fiction. However, I’m sure it has.

Good writers are indeed storytellers, regardless of their genre of choice. Becoming a good writer is what we all strive for. The good news is, we ALL have a story to tell.

 
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Posted by on January 8, 2013 in Thoughts on Writing

 

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